The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.

The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
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The table illustrates the total
number
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of employees (male and female)
as well as
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the
number
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of silk companies in two countries in the UK in the
years
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1851 and 1901.
Overall
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, throughout the
years
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the workers’
number
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fell significantly in both sexes,
while
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females accounted for the highest share. Meanwhile, the
number
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of
factories
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varies in the 50-year period. In 1851, there were 130.750 employees: male 53.964 and female at 76.786 working in the silk industry.
This
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year, recorded the highest total
number
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of employees. Their interest declined in the following
years
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and dropped dramatically until 1901 with 38.942 people.
However
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, women were enthusiastic about working in these
factories
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they were more of them than men in all
years
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.
On the other hand
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, 272
factories
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were erected in the year 1851 which was the lowest. Albeit, after a decade the
number
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increased three times and fluctuated in the next
years
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ending at 623
factories
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, years, factories with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Industrial expansion
  • Manufacturing hub
  • Technological innovation
  • Economic contribution
  • Productivity enhancement
  • Global market dynamics
  • Urbanization
  • Workforce demographics
  • Production scale
  • Social implications
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