Some people think "vertical "city is the best, where people live and work in tall buildings. Others think "horizontal" city is better, where there are few tall buildings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think "vertical "city is the best, where people live and work in tall buildings. Others think "horizontal" city is better, where there are few tall buildings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Some
people
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consider  the "vertical “
cities
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to accommodate more
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in
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land-limited areas,
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others hold a reverse viewpoint that  the "horizontal"
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are more
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friendly. In my opinion, I strongly believe that living in the "horizontal"
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is more beneficial because not only would not create too much pollution but
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dwellers can
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nature easier.

 Admittedly, there are some basic benefits for us living in vertical
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. The main advantage of
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type of city is that a great number of
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can be accommodated in a small area. Most architectures in the metropolis are tall, which means that they have more ability to accommodate more
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within a limited supply of land.
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as New York, it is necessary for them to build a great number of skyscrapers because of the high population.
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, it is easier for residents of big
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to
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various kinds of facilities because of different kinds of needs.
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, the metro, massive hospitals and department stores are more common in urban areas.
 

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, despite the advantages above, I believe the "horizontal"
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are more suitable for humans. The vital reason for
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belief is that there would not have a considerable amount of pollution created owing to the less population density. With less amount of contaminants, the environment can deal with them easier.
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, most sparsely populated places can maintain ecosystems and coexist with the environment.
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, the local residents can
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nature because most of the lands of
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kind of place are natural;
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, they have more opportunities to get close to the natural places and refresh themselves.

 In conclusion, I believe there are both pros and cons to these areas. On balance, considering the environmental problems and the opportunities to
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nature, I have a firm belief that living in a "horizontal" city is more beneficial to not only health but
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the environment.
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