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Some people believe that it is better for children learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

#people #children #language #school #outweigh
Nowadays, many people claimed that it is
more
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essential for
children
 to learn a second
language
 at junior
schools
 except senior
schools
.
This
 view has some benefits
such
 as
faster
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a faster
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 learning process
as well as
 better understanding
however
,
it's
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 drawbacks stand for
possibility
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the possibility
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 of failing
in
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final exams and some moral injuries. One of the positive points of starting bilingualism at early
ages
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 is that
children
 can learn it more
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. Primary
school
students
 did not have a wide range of vocabulary , so their mind is fresh .
This
 freshness means that
students
 can focus better
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being
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 confused by
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 learnt
lessons
.
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 just a little attempt to understand
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 they will learn completely. Learning faster is the other advantage of achieving a new
language
 sooner . Junior
students
 do not have much
homeworks
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homework
 and
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school
's projects rather than senior
students
.
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 So they would have some extra
time
 .
This
time
allow
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children
 to practice more on the new
language
 . They even can group up with other classmates in their free
time
 to speed up the learning process
On the other hand
,
children
 may experience a failure on passing their exams .
Students
 are learning basic
lessons
 at primary
schools
. They must understand each of them properly . Achieving
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 skills is hard requiring enough
time
 for
practicing
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.
This
time
 will be spent
,
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if
children
 start to be bilingual . They would be busy
practicing
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practising
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 a new
language
 .
Students
 do not have much
time
 to study their own
lessons
 which can
effect
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 their final performance negatively . The other disadvantage
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 not beginning
second
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language
 at secondary
schools
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school
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,
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is that some
influences
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my
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may
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 occur around
students
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students'
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 moods .
Schools
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lessons
prepared
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are prepared
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 carefully to be appropriate for pupils who used to just play games before starting
schools
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school
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. Primary
school
lessons
 put a
low level
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pressure
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of pressure
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above
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on
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children
 pushing them forward to grow in an
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 framework. More education may confuse pupils in which they can lose their
pation
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passion
 and interests . If
this
 situation continues
in
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for
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 long periods ,
children
 may witness psychological distress .
To sum up
 , A second
language
 tuition before secondary classes pros contain speeding up
essential
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the essential
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 learning process
whereas
 the cons like
possibility
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the possibility
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 of low performance in
school
as well as
 moral issues may occur
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