You have missed a flight for the reason beyond your control Discribe what happend and what air line should do to compansate you.

Dear madam /sir I am Manshad ck I lost my
flight
yesterday my
flight
number was 334487
Doha
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from Doha
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to Kerala because
of
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apply
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the
flight
assistance
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assistant
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they
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apply
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did not wait for me I was about step my leg
in
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on
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the
flight
but flew away. So, I request you to refund the
flight
I will be grateful if you refund my
flight
ticket. I think so you will never do that mistake again. Thank you,
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Yours
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Your
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faithfully, Manshad Chovar Kattil.
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