The diagram below shows the change, which took place in a coastal area called Pentland from 1950 to 2007.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the change, which took place in a coastal area called Pentland from 1950 to 2007.
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This
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report will refer to two maps that give information about how the coastal town of Pentland changed over a span of 40- years.
Overall
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, in 1950, Pentland was a rural area in comparison with the change process to a residential area throughout a 57-year period.
To begin
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with, in 1980, on the north
side
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was a half-cup sea. Had tow
roads
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, north to south and east to west.
Roads
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also
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forge areas into four parts. On the west
side
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and above the
roads
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place was an industrial area.
Additionally
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, grassland was on the southeast corner,
whereas
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car parking was on the east
side
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. Starting in 2007, the sea was later known as the yacht marina and was surrounded by a new road and a park developed beside it. Car parking was relocated to the northwest between a park and a multi-storey and next to it, a swimming pool was constructed.
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, on the south
side
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of the
roads
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, a cinema was opened up
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opposite houses took place of grassland.
Moreover
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, alongside the road, many shops opened and on the northeast, apartments were developed.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side, roads with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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