Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Some
people
believe that these current days are a perfect time for
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to live in comparison with
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of history. In my opinion, I completely agree with
this
statement. There are several reasons why I agree with the statement. Nowadays, the development of technology has improved our life quality better.
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,
people
can use
internet
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for many different purposes
such
as
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with others or
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the web to revise
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news.
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more variety of recreational facilities via the
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progress
of science.
Therefore
,
people
can look for pleasure easier than before, which has made
people
feel more easygoing and convenient. In my opinion, another period in history that could be
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to reside in is
the
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Prehistory. At that time, there
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no technology, no internet
as well as
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lack of
recrational
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recreational
facilities but
people
would have more time to face
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with others.
Besides
, the environment was the most significant because the atmosphere was not polluted and there were more evergreens around us.
Additionally
, the modern civilization of mankind was not appeared, which created
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equality among
people
.
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just
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food and co-exist with wildlife on a daily basis. In conclusion,
people
today have more advantages than previous generations thanks
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technological advancements, which contributed to our convenient and satisfying life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unprecedented
  • prosperity
  • technological advancements
  • global connectivity
  • longevity
  • opportunities
  • self-expression
  • renaissance
  • exploration
  • industrial revolution
  • roaring twenties
  • unparalleled
  • groundbreaking
  • transformative
  • revolutionary
  • epoch-making
  • flourished
  • transcended
  • innovations
  • distinguished
  • renaissance artists
  • explorers
  • innovative entrepreneurs
  • exhilarating
  • era
  • unforgettable
  • boom
  • vibrant
  • exuberant
  • transformed
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