Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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believe that these current days are a perfect time for

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of history. In my opinion, I completely agree with

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statement. There are several reasons why I agree with the statement. Nowadays, the development of technology has improved our life quality better.

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people

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can use

internet

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for many different purposes

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with others or

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the web to revise

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news.

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, there

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more variety of recreational facilities via the

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progress

of science.

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people

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can look for pleasure easier than before, which has made

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feel more easygoing and convenient. In my opinion, another period in history that could be

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Prehistory. At that time, there

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no technology, no internet

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lack of

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would have more time to face

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with others.

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, the environment was the most significant because the atmosphere was not polluted and there were more evergreens around us.

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, the modern civilization of mankind was not appeared, which created

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equality among

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food and co-exist with wildlife on a daily basis. In conclusion,

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today have more advantages than previous generations thanks

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technological advancements, which contributed to our convenient and satisfying life.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

222 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

unprecedented
prosperity
technological advancements
global connectivity
longevity
opportunities
self-expression
renaissance
exploration
industrial revolution
roaring twenties
unparalleled
groundbreaking
transformative
revolutionary
epoch-making
flourished
transcended
innovations
distinguished
renaissance artists
explorers
innovative entrepreneurs
exhilarating
era
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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

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