Some people believe that to reduce industrial pollution a tax should be imposed on companies, while others believe that different measures should be taken to solve the problem. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Industries have ever been a profound contributor to various types of
pollution
.
Although
a solution to tackle
this
is imposing a tax on factories, I, personally, agree with those who claim that some other measures should be considered for
this
. Introducing a tax on companies can decline the
pollution
produced by them.
This
may increase the price of products eventually, thereby decreasing the demand
of
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those.
Such
a situation may lead to a lower rate of production which means
the
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reduction in
pollution
automatically.
However
, in my
opinion
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this
cannot be a positive development in all cases, since it may elevate the cost of living for people as well. When it comes to food products, the cost is of much more significance, and the policies should be adopted in
such
a way that most people can afford them,
for example
. There are some other useful measures to deal with
this
problem. Prime among them is the
encouraging
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of companies to use renewable energy derived from natural sources. The more we use them, the
less
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exhaust fumes, which play a leading role in producing air pollutants, will be emitted. Added to
this
is enforcing the industries to use some environmentally friendly ways to dispose of
waste
. The
waste
produced by them can contaminate the ground and water,
both
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.
Therefore
, if they apply
recycling
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or reusing their
waste
, rather than leaving it in nature, it will be a great deal of contribution to reducing
the
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industrial
pollution
. In the end, I think imposing a tax on companies should be carefully studied, and it is not the only solution. Some other measures
such
as using renewable energy or some eco-friendly ways of
waste
disposal would be more effective.
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