Your neighbours have recently written you a complaint about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise and apologise. Describe what actions you will take in future to reduce the noise.

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Dear

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Rodgers, I am writing to you in response to your complaint about the noise from my apartment. As you know, our

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son has just begun his music lessons. He is fond of the drums, so we recently bought his first acoustic drum kit. He was excited about it and is always on it, trying out the different drums and cymbals. I understand

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is not the most ideal situation and want to apologise for

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caused. In order to reduce the noise, we plan to have a dedicated playing time of 30 minutes.

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intend to buy noise cancellation pads for the drums.

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, depending on how his learning goes, we want to replace the acoustic kit with an electronic one. I hope

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helps and thank you for your patience and cooperation. Yours Sincerely, Andrew Songate

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

144 words

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Your neighbours have recently written you a complaint about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise and apologise. Describe what actions you will take in future to reduce the noise.

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