Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

It is sometimes argued that wild

animals

and birds are excessively observed and protected by governments.

However

, I believe that wild

animals

deserve more resources to be safe from

detrentally

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detrimentally

impact

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from individuals. There are several reasons supporting

this

viewpoint which could be discussed objectively during the course of

this

essay.

To begin

with, many species almost extinct because of illegal activities which are made by

human

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humans

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. People hunt a huge number of

animals

to collect meat and skin to

solve

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their hungry stomachs and sell them to receive money.

However

, each type of animal is the food for bigger predators, if a species is removed from the Earth, it will change the food chain in the natural cycle.

For example

, the grasshopper is eaten by the pigeon,

however

, with the spread of pesticides, the grasshopper is dead leading to the famine of the pigeon.

Secondly

, with the development of the industrial

revolution

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and population explosion, wild

aminals

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animals

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lose

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their habitats and natural environment. With the expanse of the

human

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humans

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, forests and mountains are replaced by industries and

accommodation

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to adapt to the

demand

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of individuals.

Thus

, the number of

animals

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in order to expand human habitat.

For instance

, about 10% of forests in Vietnam were repurposed to become infrastructure for inhabitants. In conclusion, for several reasons

such

as being victims of illegal activities and the industrial revolution, wild

animals

and birds face

up to

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many risks, so both the authorities and individuals should have the responsibility to protect them from extinction.