Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment.What can the gov do to address the problem? What can individuals do…?
There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the approaches humans are harming the natural surroundings.
Without a shadow of a doubt,there are various ways to harm the environment, especially
degradation
of air quality.Correct article usage
the degradation
For instance
Vietnam,most people in the country use private vehicles
which produce a lot of toxic exhaust fumes such
as motorbikes,automobiles
since they are cheap and very convenient to use.Correct word choice
and automobiles
Hence
, the mid-income Vietnamese owner of these conventional fuel-powered vehicles
are
hiking and making the atmosphere in major cities alarmingly contaminated.
Change the verb form
is
While
the ways of dealing damage
are widely acknowledged,governors and individuals can still join hands and find a tactic to deal with Change preposition
with damage
this
severe growing problem.In terms of the government,they should introduce green taxes for alternative energy using
Add a hyphen
energy-using
vehicles
such
as Vinfast’s electrical bike or electric using for wheel vehicles
which stimulate people to use more of them.Regarding to
citizens,we should start using public transportation using electrical power Remove the preposition
apply
such
as Vingroup’s Vinbus .
In conclusion,serious problems impacting on
nature are brought by humans and it is vital that everybody should start making big changes in order to preserve the environment.Change preposition
apply
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...