Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

#manager #cinema #movie #theatre #jacket #film

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I lost my favourite

jacket

while

watching a film at the Balaka cinema hall which is under your supervision.

Moreover

, I went to the theatre on 25th March and the film was spiderman 2 and started at 8:30pm. It was a Canada Goose

jacket

which costs me $1200 and the colour was red with a white collar. It's a brand new

jacket

which I bought only a month ago.

Furthermore

, I was seated in the second row and my seat number was 10H. It was midnight when the film finished.

However

, I kept the

jacket

in an empty seat and when I came outside after the movie suddenly I noticed that I forgot my

jacket

inside the room. I ran away as soon as I realized but could not find it.

Further

this

, I will be grateful if you check the footage of the CCTV camera of that time period or ask your staff about the incident. So that I can find out what happened and complain about the matter to the police. I await your prompt response. Yours Faithfully, Lisa

Submitted by Lisa Bhuiyan on Fri Mar 31 2023

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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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