The line graph gives information about the proportion of students from age 18-25 years old universities in four various areas (Singapore, Malaysia, Philippines, Thailand) since 1961 to 2011.
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The line graph gives information about the proportion of students from age 18-25
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old universities
in four various areas (Singapore, Change preposition
in universities
Malaysia
, Philippines, Thailand) since
1961 to 2011.
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Overall
, it is clear from the graph that there was an increase in the number of students in all countries over the given period.
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it is obvious that in 1961 the highest proportion of students in academic institutions was in Thailand, which accounted for around 25%. Add a comma
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While
, the lowest number was in Malaysia
, which constituted below 5%. Thailand fluctuated slightly over the next 30 years
and decreased by around 5%. Then
rose dramatically and reached a peak of 43%. In comparison with Singapore
there was a significant fluctuation from 1961 to 2011 and Add a comma
,Singapore
reached
40%.
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the Philippines
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years
by almost 7%. Whereas
, Malaysia
went up gradually during that period and reached one in ten. Both tow
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years
they rose steadily and in 1991 both of them had the same figure, which was 15 %. Malaysia
levelled off during the next twenty years
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