Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
As we all know, There are a lot of humans on earth who has different ability and intelligence. Actually, when we were children, our families could guess what talent we have. Some parents guide us
according to
our talents. I can say that acumen can bring us success. According to
investigators, children's brilliance depends on their parents. For instance
, Albert Einstein is the most celebrated physicist in the World. He was a very clever person and as I remember he had an IQ of over 150. His son is also
highly intelligent but we have not to heard his name because he did not use innate chance. At this
point, We have to the importance of agility and how can we improve ourselves.
In my opinion, Every people should do a job which has the ability. Unfortunately, many people do different jobs instead
of doing what they are capable of. There are several reasons for this
. For example
; making money. Nowadays, many courses and education systems are always available and support knowledge but if the person has a talent that person might learn about everything quickly.
In conclusion, working and studying is
vital but everyone has different perceptions. If we have an innate ability, we have to focus on our wit. I firmly hope, my children will have language abilities.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
Submitted by celilkilic on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite