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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided table chart details the trade in
coffee
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 and bananas with the Fairtrade label between 1999 and 2004 in five European countries, represented in millions of
euros
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.
Overall
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,
sales
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 data for both
coffee
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 and bananas indicates an increase in almost all the nations.
Sales
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 of
coffee
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 increased most and least in the UK and
Denmark
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, respectively,
whereas
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 the rate of change in fairtrade banana
sales
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 was the highest in
Denmark
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 during
this
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 time. In the UK, the
sales
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 volume of Fairtrade-certified
coffee
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 saw the biggest increase, from 1.5
million
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euros
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 in 1999 to 20
million
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euros
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 in 2004.
Denmark
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,
on the other hand
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, experienced the smallest growth, the
sales
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 from 1.8
million
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 to only 2
million
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euros
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 in the same period.
However
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, in Switzerland, these
sales
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 doubled from 3 to 6
million
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euros
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. From 1999 to 2004,
Denmark
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 witnessed the largest rate of increase in
fairtrade
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fair trade
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 banana
sales
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, from 0.6 to 4
million
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euros
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,
while
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 the UK and Switzerland
also
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 saw considerable growth during
this
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 time, from 15 to 47
million
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 and 1 to 5.5
million
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euros
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, respectively. A distinct pattern,
however
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, was seen in Belgium and Sweden, where
sales
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 of bananas fell from 1.8 to 1
million
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 and 2 to 0.9
million
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euros
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, correspondingly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Pattern
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Comparison
  • Relationship
  • Correlation
  • Significant
  • Implication
  • Prediction
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