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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarize the informtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarize the informtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The selected process illustrates the steps of
noodles
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 preparation in a factory , it contains 8 phases
such
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 as storage silos , mixer, dough sheets ,
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drough
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drought
dough
 strips,
noodles
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 discs , cooking , drying , vegetables , spices , labelling and sealing. in the beginning, the truck downloads flour to the storage silos and flour will be transported to the mixer where water and oil will be added. After the mixing process, it will pass to the rollers and
cut
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 into dough sheets. In the following level, the
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drough
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drought
dough
rough
 sheets will be converted to
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rough
dough
drought
drough
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 strips. moving to
next
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the next
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 phases, the
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drough
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dough
drought
 strips are changed to
noodles
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 discs. Afterwards,
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noodles
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the noodles
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 discs are cooked and dried to be ready for customers. Later on, it will be packed in cups where vegetables and spices are used.
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, the packages will be
labeled
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labelled
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 and sealed and released into
market
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the market
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles, drough with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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