The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the
coffee
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and tea consumption and drinking habits of residents living in five Australian cities.
It is clear that
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approximately half of the citizens in all five cities visited a café in the past four weeks. Australians in general preferred to buy instant
coffee
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as opposed to fresh
coffee
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. Residents of Melbourne and Hobart were the biggest fans of drinking tea or
coffee
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in cafés, with figures both about 63%,
while
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the corresponding proportion of Adelaide was barely closer to 50%. The rates of Sydney and Brisbane were
also
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not negligible, at around 61% and 56% respectively. 54% of people in Hobart purchased instant
coffee
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in the
last
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four weeks, with citizens in Brisbane following closely behind. In Adelaide, Melbourne and Sydney, just under half of residents have consumed instant
coffee
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.
Nevertheless
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, these figures were still higher
overall
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than those for buying fresh
coffee
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. A mere 34% of Brisbane and Adelaide bought fresh
coffee
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, and the percentages in the other cities were relatively low as well.
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