The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year
Data on different transportation and average distance by miles per year travelled by English people in the year 1985 and 2000. Looking at the table, it can be seen that the highest type of vehicle used is
cars
while
the lowest number was obtained by taxis and bicycles. An increased number of people also
travelled in the year 2000.
In 1985 almost 60 per cent of commuters ride cars
while
a minimal number opt to hire taxis and bicycles.
Long-distance buses followed cars
in terms of usage but the local bus was low on average.
An increased trend in overall
numbers of travellers, more than 40 per cent, were reported, and they preferred cars
, and long-distance buses, on the other hand
, other types like local buses, taxis, bicycles and walking modes declined.Submitted by lynmarq15 on
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