The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.

The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.
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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the rate of British
people
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among four age groups who recognised the
Queen
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, prime minister, chancellor or
mayor
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of
London
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from photographs in the UK.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
Queen
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is the most frequently could be recognised among these ages, compared to the least that of finding
London
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Mayor
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.
People
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from 41 to 60 showed the highest rate of recognising four persons. In terms of
people
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under 20, the rate of finding the
queen
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was 90%,
whereas
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the figure for the Chancellor and
Mayor
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of
London
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shared an equal number, merely 20% each. The 41 to 60 age bracket who found the
queen
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was the highest, at 100%, and exactly 60% recognised the
Mayor
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of
London
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, which fell by 40%.
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, over 61 ages and aged from 21 to 40 experienced a converse trend, the 80% of 21-40-year-old
people
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could find the prime minister, compared to approximately 65% of those over 61. 70% of inhabitants over 61 of recognising the chancellor, which was more than twice higher than that of the age group from 21 to 40.
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