The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.

The graph shows the results of a survey of British public figures that people can recognise from their photographs.
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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the rate of British
people
among four age groups who recognised the
Queen
, prime minister, chancellor or
mayor
of
London
from photographs in the UK.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
Queen
is the most frequently could be recognised among these ages, compared to the least that of finding
London
Mayor
.
People
from 41 to 60 showed the highest rate of recognising four persons. In terms of
people
under 20, the rate of finding the
queen
was 90%,
whereas
the figure for the Chancellor and
Mayor
of
London
shared an equal number, merely 20% each. The 41 to 60 age bracket who found the
queen
was the highest, at 100%, and exactly 60% recognised the
Mayor
of
London
, which fell by 40%.
However
, over 61 ages and aged from 21 to 40 experienced a converse trend, the 80% of 21-40-year-old
people
could find the prime minister, compared to approximately 65% of those over 61. 70% of inhabitants over 61 of recognising the chancellor, which was more than twice higher than that of the age group from 21 to 40.
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