You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, • give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college

#course #college #accommodation #officer #departure #date #information

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. I am from Uzbekistan. I am planning to attend a short course at a training college abroad .

For

this

reason

am writing

this

letter to request your course and accommodation

this

is the

reason

have never been overseas

as well as

this

college too .

That is

why,

do have not enough information about your chamber . Yet ,

am going to say that

want to live in your accommodation for a

while

. First and foremost,

am studying English in my country.

That is

why,

decide to train in another country.

However

have some issues which are related to my documents . So ,

will go to your college next month.

For

this

reason

would be grateful if you could send the details about your chamber .

This

is the

reason

am following a diet here for several months and

could be continued there

also

when

will reach . I would be grateful if you could arrange facilities for my diet accommodation. Because of Ramadan. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Joziba Maxmasoliyeva.

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

223 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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