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You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter, • give details of your course and your arrival/departure date • explain your accommodation needs • ask for information about getting to and from the college

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope
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 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. I am from Uzbekistan. I am planning to attend a short course at a training college abroad .
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 have never been overseas
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 want to live in your accommodation for a
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 am studying English in my country.
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 decide to train in another country.
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 have some issues which are related to my documents . So ,
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 will go to your college next month.
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 would be grateful if you could send the details about your chamber .
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 am following a diet here for several months and
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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