The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year

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A glance at the table reveals some information approximately the changes that occurred in the methods of travel in England from 1985 to 2000. The unit of measurement is the mile.

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, the usage of travel modes rose more in 2000 in comparison to 1985, and usage of taxis and long-distance buses increased by over 2 times in 2000.

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the table, walking, local bus and bicycle declined during 15 years(18

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, 155

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and 10

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respectively). The average distance that covers by cars soared to 4806

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in 2000

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366 and 585 by trains and other vehicles respectively in the same year.

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The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year

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