The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year

The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year
A glance at the table reveals some information approximately the changes that occurred in the methods of travel in England from 1985 to 2000. The unit of measurement is the mile.
Overall
, the usage of travel modes rose more in 2000 in comparison to 1985, and usage of taxis and long-distance buses increased by over 2 times in 2000.
According to
the table, walking, local bus and bicycle declined during 15 years(18
miles
, 155
miles
and 10
miles
respectively). The average distance that covers by cars soared to 4806
miles
in 2000
whereas
this
amount peaked
to
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366 and 585 by trains and other vehicles respectively in the same year.
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