Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers. Others believe that a woman’s role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

As we are living in an era filled with challenges in all walks of

life

with a cutting-edge world of technology and

prosperous

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a prosperous

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economy accompanied by

life

and

work

issues of getting

job

opportunities with affordable income to maintain a better

life

and meet the needs of both

men

and

women

as well.

However

,

although

a number of people believe that

women

should stay at home and take

of

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their children,

while

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others embrace the notion that

women

should share

this

settled

life

financially as well and they are definitely able to manage both

house

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houses

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and

work

successfully. In my opinion, I strongly believe the second belief for

women

to

having

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have

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an

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apply

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equal

job

opportunity

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opportunities

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for many benefits. One obvious reason is that

women

proved to be

professiont

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professional

professions

in their

work

,if not equal with their partners, more competent and disciplined for most careers.

For instance

, as we live in a thriving social and economic development, many

job

opportunities have opened their gates for

women

to get

the

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career

of

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in

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various government sectors

such

as medical, financial,

even

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and even

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military ministries.

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, new

of

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women

students have just graduated from the military royal ministry to share

this

kind of

job

which some people assume that only limited to

men

.

Consequently

, the female

receive

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receives

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higher

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a higher

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salary

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salaries

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to manage their house and children to send them

learn

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to learn

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in

a better educational schools

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better educational schools

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and afford other courses to enhance their

skill

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skills

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in

life

. After

work

, they

also

can observe and take care of them and cook observe and support them in what they encounter and attempt

dealing

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to deal

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with difficulties,

which

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unlike

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men

, they cannot

have

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multitasking

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multitask

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merely seeking relaxation after working. Another beneficial role in integrating

women

in the

work

markets is that they have mutual responsibilities with their husbands to manage their lives which

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is

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hard for

men

to afford and be responsible

by

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for

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themselves. Since we live nowadays in higher prosperous living in all fields, more demanding salaries

preferred

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are preferred

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, therefore,

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therefore

they will definitely manage together and have more satisfaction to improve their lives. In conclusion, I think

women

successfully proved and played

a

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considerable assistance beside their partner males to manage their lives socially and financially.