Many people believe the idea of school children wearing a school uniform, but should teachers as well be required to conform to a dress code?

The wearing of
school
uniform
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is an issue
that is
both supported and opposed by many people. Numerous schools around the world require
students
to wear
school
uniforms
on their grounds,
however
,
teachers
are not often needed to clothe a specific
uniform
while
working. It has
therefore
been suggested that it should be compulsory for
teachers
to wear a specific
uniform
or follow a specific
dress
code on a daily basis. One reason for introducing a
dress
for
teachers
would be that
teachers
typically function as role models.
This
means for
students
who are not willing to conform to the
dress
code of their
school
, it would be beneficial to see figures of authority clothing the same outfit as
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each
other, and they would
then
potentially be more willing to
to
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follow their own
dress
. Another reason for Introducing a compulsory
dress
code for
teachers
would be that if all
teachers
wore the same cloth, there would be no visible difference
amongst
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them. On top of that,
naturally
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some
teachers
are wealthier than others and would tend to show
this
through their clothing.
This
could cause other
teachers
to feel Inferior and
therefore
could result in
lower quality
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work and decreased motivation.
Furthermore
,
students
would feel treated fair, of not only they, but
teachers
as well had to wear a certain
uniform
in
school
.
Lastly
,
uniforms
for
teachers
would enable
students
and other
teachers
to easily distinguish between
school
staff and other adults. It is believed that in many schools there is no
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security system and strangers can easily enter and steal something or commit other crimes.
Thus
, if
teachers
wore
uniforms
, one would
then
be able to approach and confront strangers more easily, as one could distinguish
teachers
wearing
uniforms
clearly from other adults In conclusion, there are many positive effects of introducing
uniforms
for
teachers
and
therefore
, in my opinion, they should be installed in as many schools as possible.
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