The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It's true that, nowadays, many people have a tendency to
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latest
clothes
and other personal goods
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from another human. In
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with, it is undeniable that, in recent times many people try to be
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of attention, and gain
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reputation in front of
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society. In my opinion,
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celebrities contribute to the trend.
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is because
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they are should wear trending
clothes
,
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with brand companies. To quote
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, these situations
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addiction among individuals
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trendy items. As an example, we can see wide world peoples have their role
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,
moreover
,
this
condition simultaneously
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their
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style, and personality,
as well as
their characteristics.
On the other hand
, I believe that
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the
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social media
also
contribute to
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one another by sharing their experiences and opinions about
clothes
or products which is can cause
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decisions of others. As an example, in my country, the telegram app most useful program in recent times, and many young and old generations spent their time
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chatting and discussing
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topic
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.
According to
national marketing reports,
this
point influence to rise cope one's opinions and personal perspectives. In conclusion,
it is clear that
humans have a tendency to copy someone's ideas
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when it comes to fashion and consumer goods.
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this
trend will
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their thinking capacity in the near future. For that, they should dedicate themselves to
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mundane knowledge
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