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The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given illustrates the productivity of the world's top three countries of
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 exporters in 2009 and 2019. Units are measured in a million metric tonnes. Meanwhile, the additional pie chart displays the proportions of consumer costs for each
pineapple
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 in 2019.
Overall
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, cumulatively
Country
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 A was the highest contributor to exporting
pineapple
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 among the other two countries. The trends were more likely to increase throughout the period except in
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 B.
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, the biggest cost per consumer for each
pineapple
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 was allocated to distribution and retail compared to the other six categories. Starting at 1
MMT
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 in 2009,
Country
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 A experienced a significant increment of
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 exportation by approximately 9
MMT
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 in ten years after.
In contrast
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,
Country
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 C was only able to contribute 0.2
MMT
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 before slightly rising up to 0.5
MMT
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 during the period given.
Furthermore
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,
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 B was in the middle position which stood at 4.5
MMT
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then
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 dropped its productivity by around 3
MMT
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. The majority of the cost per
pineapple
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 was utilized for distribution & retail with exactly 35%. The cost allocation in profit, taxes, international transport, and import licences was ranging from 10-18% for each group. Producer and export costs contributed a little amount by 5% and 4% respectively.
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