The bar chart below shows the percentage of share of total world production by Asia, Europe and other parts of the world from the years 1840 to 2000.

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The line graph provides the portion of global fabrication owned by

Asia

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Europe

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, and the rest of the

world

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from 1840 to 2000.

Overall

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, it can be seen that

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the production of the rest of the

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increased,

Asia

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's and

Europe

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's share decreased. About

Asia

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and

Europe

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, in the year,1840 the former's fraction of

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production was a little more than half of the total and the latter was just under it by around 10%. Despite

Europe

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's proportion

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a regular slight improvement, it only lasted 80 years

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a downward trend that started at that point. Meanwhile,

Asia

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's fabrication first approximately halved and

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, in 1960 witnessed a recovery that lead the percentage up to nearly 40% Even though in 1840 the fabrication of the rest of the

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was almost one-tenth of the total, it

then

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followed a quite consistent growth gaining roughly 30% during the next 120 years

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Vocabulary: Replace the words asia, europe, world with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

153 words

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The bar chart below shows the percentage of share of total world production by Asia, Europe and other parts of the world from the years 1840 to 2000.

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