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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

Migration
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 of
people
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 in search of better living and working
opportunities
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 is very common at the present age. The tendency of efficient
people
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 of moving from impoverished
countries
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 to wealthy ones arises some debates about stealing talent.
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, some disagree with the statement that it is so normal to move from one place to another. Despite debates,
migration
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 from one place to another is necessary to ensure better living and
work
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. The ever-increasement of
migration
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 from a poor country to a rich one helps to satisfy
people
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 with several new experiences and
opportunities
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. Developed
countries
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 have plenty of options to
work
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 and earn a handsome salary with a secure working environment.
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, security and better opportunity of living with the entire family are
also
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 provided by the rich
countries
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.
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,
people
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 want to grab that and try to ensure a better environment not only for themselves but
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 for their families.
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, in Australia, Canada and the USA in the past 10 years, approximately 5 million
people
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 migrated for
work
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opportunities
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 and living.
People
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 become ambitious to assure those
opportunities
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 in their life and migrate.
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, some
people
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 do not support
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 movement of
people
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 and illustrate that
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 the
migration
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 of
people
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 is the loss of talent from the poor nations. Poor
countries
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 spend a lot of money to build up their nation and make them suitable for
work
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.
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, the movement of efficient
people
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 from poor to rich
countries
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 is a kind of unfair means to some
people
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. Some specialists ,
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, state that every person has a commitment to their motherland and should not leave the country when they get qualified. So, leaving the country would not always be supported by some
people
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.
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,
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migration
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 is acceptable in terms of better
work
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 and living, it is not always supported by all. If we assure better living in poor
countries
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,
people
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 would stay in their home
countries
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Globalization
  • Skilled workforce
  • Socioeconomic growth
  • Economic disparity
  • Specialist areas
  • Free market of skills
  • Immigration policies
  • Labor market
  • Talent attraction
  • Professional development
  • Remittances
  • Economic incentives
  • Knowledge transfer
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