The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. https://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/sites/default/files/styles/bc-landscape-800x450/public/ac_writing_task_1_0.png?itok=xIMVVG_4
The line graph illustrates how many materials:
alumininium
cans, plastics, glass containers and paper and cardboard, were recycled during the given period from 1982 to 2010.
In general, what could be Correct your spelling
aluminium
highligted
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highlighted
grom
the given graph is that the amount of Correct your spelling
from
recycling
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recycled
alumininium
cans rose over 28 years. Another interesting point is that the percentage of people who recycled plastics Correct your spelling
aluminium
is remained
constant from 1982 to 2010.
Looking at the details, as regard paper and cardboard, the Change to the active voice
remains
remained
recyling
started at 65 per Correct your spelling
recycling
cent
in 1982, fluctuated, rose quickly in 1994 and Use synonyms
then
experienced a decrease from 80 per Linking Words
cent
to 70. During the observed period, approximately 50 Use synonyms
percent
of glass containers Change the spelling
per cent
was
recycled Change the verb form
were
in
the beginning of the given period, halved and Change the preposition
at
then
reached a peak at 60 per Linking Words
cent
.
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By contrast
, the percentage of how many Linking Words
alumininium
cans recycled increased 9 times, it started from 5 per Correct your spelling
aluminium
cent
and Use synonyms
then
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growed
dramatically to 45 per Wrong verb form
growing
cent
.Use synonyms
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