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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. many of the problems young people now experience such as juvenile deliquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opioion?

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Gender equality had played an important role where
women
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 in society, have a major role for the
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 twenty years. Many people believe that the fact that
women
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work
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, young people are having issues
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 as juvenile
delinquency
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 as their mothers are not here to look after them after school hours. I believe that
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 there are other factors leading them to
delinquency
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 which I will elaborate on in the essay. In the present circumstances,
women
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 need to
work
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 so that they can help with the household expenses and the education of their
children
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. In the corporate world today,
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 are being appreciated for their hard
work
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 and contribution to the economic sector.
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, it is true that the time spent with their
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 is limited.
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, young
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 are sometimes staying unattended after school and ,eventually,
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bad company
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 as drug addicts and dealers. But
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, if
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 do not
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, poverty will still be present.
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, there are other reasons that
children
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 are facing
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,
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 as watching violence on television, and they are exposed to sexual images and videos.
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, social media is having
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 a bad influence on youngsters nowadays that they want to imitate their favourite singers and actors who smoke
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 and consume alcohol and drugs. Other factors
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 as divorced parents, and violence at home are
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 the reasons for juvenile delinquencies. In conclusion, I believe that we should not blame
women
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 as the main reason for juvenile
delinquency
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. A woman needs to
work
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 nowadays to help their family. I strongly believe that the authorities should have after-school programs to support youngsters and guide them in the proper direction. Another solution could be that the government promotes working-from-home schemes that will allow
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 to have an eye on their
children
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 at home.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Markedly
  • Juvenile delinquency
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Child upbringing
  • Parental supervision
  • Family dynamics
  • Workforce participation
  • Societal infrastructure
  • Childcare systems
  • Parental responsibilities
  • Misconception
  • Economic benefits
  • Role modeling
  • Gender equality
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