The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives
an information
about the proportion of Remove the article
information
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people
who lives in three different sectors in the country
of Australia. The dwellers are those who were born in the country
and some of them are non-Australian native
. The figures compare data collected between 1995 and 2010.
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natives
Overall
, both groups
still chose to live in urban areas
. Although
, there was significant
drop Add an article
a significant
of
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in
percentages
of Correct article usage
the percentages
people
who opt to live in the
rural Correct article usage
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areas
and small towns during the period of the study.
In 1995, people
born in Australia and outside the country
preferred to reside in the the
city with a percentage of roughly 50-60%. Followed closely by living in the rural Remove the redundancy
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areas
at nearly 30-40% in both groups
. A different pattern is noted for living in the town as choice
of the Add an article
the choice
groups
to live in at approximately a fifth of the total percent
.
In the year 2010, both Change the spelling
per cent
groups
of people
were still clued up on residing in the urban areas
having not more than 80%. Natural born in Australia chose to live towns
and countryside sharing the same figure of about 15%. Change preposition
in towns
People
born outside the country
opt less to live in rural
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a rural
the rural
area
and had Fix the agreement mistake
areas
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a signifacant
signifacant
decrease in percentage by more than twofold as compared in 1995. Those who preferred to reside in the towns have Correct your spelling
significant
a
estimated proportion of 10%.Change the article
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