Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?
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advertisements
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solutions to avoid them .
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consideration
people
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in these
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discounts
people
. There are many brands in these apps and they are also
at discount prices . The customers keep buying these brands without knowing of
they are real or fake . Because of fact that , these Correct your spelling
if
products
cheaper than in bazaar .
To solve this
problem , there should be a regulatory body to check the quality and authenticity of the marketed products
. This
will ensure that anything , that is
being advertised , is not just to lure the clients instead
is a genuine and authentic product . Moreover
, famous persons should consider verifying the brand . Thereafter
, they should become the brand ambassador of a company . For example
, one of the well-known singer
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