Advertising influence people to buy things such as clothes and shoes. What are the problems caused by that? What solution should be given?

Advertisement , marketing a product is the main technique

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more benefits by growing the sales of that particular product .

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people

are

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purchase different new things for apps and

advertises

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advertisements

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,

such

as clothes and shoes .

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propose

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so

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possble

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possible

solutions to avoid them .

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with , the most important

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consideration

is ,

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end up buying the wrong

products

as they blindly start trusting the

products

after watching

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advert .

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why , not only are they showing

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fake information but

also

they are bought

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checking

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in real life .

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,

in

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at

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present ,

people

are using a lot of programs or apps ,

such

as Uzum

market

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Market

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and Aliexpress . The

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community

community are

bought electronic equipment , materials and shoes

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through this

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this applications

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.

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to

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,

these

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markets , many items are sold at various

discuonts

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discounts

and attract

people

. There are many brands in these apps and they are

also

at discount prices . The customers keep buying these brands without knowing

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if

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they are real or fake . Because of fact that , these

products

cheaper than in bazaar . To solve

this

problem , there should be a regulatory body to check the quality and authenticity of the marketed

products

.

This

will ensure that anything ,

that is

being advertised , is not just to lure the clients

instead

is a genuine and authentic product .

Moreover

, famous persons should consider verifying the brand .

Thereafter

, they should become the brand ambassador of a company .

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, one of the well-known

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is

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Shahzoda advertised the Uzum market .

Then

a little bit of

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a few

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people

collected

this

program . In my solution

this

, if a famous actress is advertising something . I would like to check the quality

this

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thing first .

To conclude

, television breaks may lead to various kinds of issues

such

as may put an end to other business developments , but

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regulatory body these problems can be resolved easily .