The chart illustrates the percentage change in average house prices in New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London by compared the average house prices in 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002 with the average house prices in 1989.

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The provided bar chart illustrates the average change in house

prices

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in five different cities by percentage from 1900 to 2002.

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, it can be clearly seen from the chart that, London has the highest altitude and

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has the lowest decrease with Tokyo. On the one hand, between 1990 and 1995 there was a significant reduction in house

prices

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in New York, Tokyo and London to hit 5% in the USA, and around 7% in Japan and the UK.

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in Madrid and Frankfurt, the

prices

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have risen by up approximately 2% on average.

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, from 1996 to 2002 Tokyo still had low

prices

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but there was development in the other cities, in NewYork the average

prices

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increased by 5%,

moreover

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in Madrid rises 4%,

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in Frankfort nearly just 1%, but, London there was increase sharply to arrived more than 10%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 65%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

146 words

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The chart illustrates the percentage change in average house prices in New York, Madrid, Tokyo, Frankfurt and London by compared the average house prices in 1990 to 1995 and 1996 to 2002 with the average house prices in 1989.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

13/05 Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.