Task 1 The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph represents the trend in the recycling of four categories of materials between 1982 to 2010. The substances depicted include
paper
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and
cardboard
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,
glass
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containers,
aluminium
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cans, and
plastics
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.
Overall
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, it is evident that recycling was in fashion for
paper
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and
cardboard
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and
glass
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containers much before
aluminium
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and
plastics
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, as the former has been reused in large numbers since 1982
while
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the trend was applied to the latter groups only about four to eight years later respectively. Notably,
paper
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and carboards have
also
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been the dominant division of commodities being reprocessed, followed by
glass
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materials,
whereas
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plastics
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have been the least reclaimed. Zooming into the figures, between 1982 and 1990, about 65 to 70% of
paper
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and
cardboard
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were recycled which
then
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surged to an all-time high of 80% by the year 1994.
Following
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this
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, the proportion of
paper
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and
cardboard
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being reused has steadily fallen. As for the
glass
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containers, the numbers being recycled experienced an
overall
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decline of 10% over eight years post-1982, subsequent to which the proportion of reprocessed goods rose to 60% by 2010.
On the other hand
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,
Aluminium
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cans and
plastics
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, albeit entering the recycling trend much later, have solely faced increments in the proportions being reclaimed.
While
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the portion of
aluminium
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commodities being reused has increased sharply from 5% in 1986 to 45% in 2010, plastic is subject to a rather gradual increase in its recycled percentage, which is recorded to be about 1% in 1990 and stands only at 9% by 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard, glass, aluminium, plastics with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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