You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbors disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter •describe how this situation affects you; •explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; •ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

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Dear John, I am writing

this

letter to bring to your notice the inconvenience caused by neighbours on a regular basis. I am working as a technician from 7 AM to 5 PM daily in a medical lab. After a hectic day at work, I reach home in the evening to relax.

However

, the people living next door turn on the TV at a high volume all night and, they party too loud on weekends.

Due to

this

, I hardly sleep and my migraine triggers back almost every day. I have not only called them several times but

also

dropped a personal note to let them know the problem I am facing.

However

, I did not see any change and they continue to irritate me with the loud noises. Could you please intervene in

this

matter and help me with

this

situation as soon as possible

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I would like you to come to the apartment , and take strict action against them by sending a notice for the disturbance. Thanks in advance Yours Faithfully, Praveena

Submitted by praveenareddy.p on Mon Apr 03 2023

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

175 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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