The graph shows the percentages of people going to cinemas in a European country on different days
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the community coming to cinemas in a European country on all
days
of the week. Overall
, it is apparent that the majority of people opted for going to the cinema
these days
at weekends. Furthermore
, the figures for Wednesday the watching at cinema
witnessed a downward trend, as well as
the percentage of other days
, as well as
the percentage of other days
recorded no significant changes over the years
.
First of all, it can be seen that the figures for people coming to the cinemas on Saturday were the highest rate,
when its proportion peaked at more than 40% over the Remove the comma
apply
years
. In addition
, a steep decline of approximately 10% was recorded in the number of audiences at the cinema
on Sunday in three different years
, while
the figure for Friday remained stable at 30% following 4 years
Subsequently
, the proportion of spectators watching at the cinema
on Wednesday was gradually falling over the years
, when it was under 10% in the final year. Meanwhile, there was considerable fluctuation in the figure of people going to the cinema
for the rest of the days
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