You currently live in a rental apartment, and the noise from your neighbors disturbs you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter •describe how this situation affects you; •explain what steps you have taken to address the problem; •ask the landlord to take action to resolve the issue.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. By the way, my name is Joziba Maxmasoliyeva. Whose is your new renter? Your apartment is very comfortable and beautiful.

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is the reason, it has a garden to walk in in the evening times. Yet ,

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am a little disappointed with my neighbour .

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reason,

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am writing

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letter to express my position.

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to say, she is very noisy to me .

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is the reason, she has a dog and it always barks.

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very noisy to study .

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why , I could not concentrate on my focus. First and foremost,

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asked her not to make noise . Yet , she could not agree to my request .

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request you to change my neighbour.

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hope you understand my situation.

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would appreciate it if you could help me with the matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Maxmasoliyeva Joziba.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

183 words

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Structure your letter

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