The diagram shows the process of making the soft cheese
The picture illustrates the multiple-stage process of how soft cheese is made. In order to make cheese some raw materials
such
as water
and mild are used.
It is clear that
the process contains 5 steps which begin with mixing water
and milk. In the next steps the mixture
sometimes is cooled and sometimes heated.
In the first three ,steps several processes are taken. Firstly
, It begins with mixing milk and water
then
in the next step the combination of substances is cooled for two hours
at under 5 degrees of celsius after that before the third stage, salt is added to the mixture
and just after ,that the mixture
is going to fermentation by heating for 2 hours
in 35 degrees of celsius
.
In the next Change the capitalization
Celsius
stations
, the Fix the agreement mistake
station
mixture
is heated until the water
is boiled, this
stage is take 8 hours
long and ,finally
in the Add a comma
,finally
last
step it is cooled again for 8 hours
at a low temperature of about 5 degrees delicious the final outcomes are soft cheese and water
which are passed on filters separately.Submitted by arsalan.azizzadeh on
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