Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some other useful activities?

Often shopping is considered a form of waste of

time

, but it is maybe the most common and less toxic way to get out

from

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our stressful routine, and not only for a juvenile.

While

someone could relax

drinking

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a bottle of wine,

other

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ones

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could

prefer

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spend money

in

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useless objects in order to have a moment of fun. We should not criminalize

this

behaviour, it is strictly linked to our nature as

human-beings

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human beings

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First of all, I think we

have

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not

the

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moral duty to do always something useful. We cannot avoid our need

of

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free

time

,

nevertheless

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I think

this

is

also

a way to increase our productivity at work. We have to coercively separate our

time

in

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from the

time

we can spend even in shopping

centers

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.

However

, we cannot do in every moment something

due to

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our capability as workers.

Consequently

, it is obvious

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most

of

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the

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people want to spend the money coming from their labour with the only aim to have

in

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instant

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gratification

of

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hours and hours spent looking at a computer.

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,

for instance

, the desire of my mother, who is been working for 30 years as a teacher,

of

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buy a new pair of shoes is absolutely understandable. In conclusion, we cannot knock down on working for all our

time

: the more you work, the more you are stressed. We need free

time

, even spent shopping, in order to have a better life. We all have to brush up on how to have

an

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health

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and equilibrated life.