The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
The given line graph depicts the information about the crimes that occurred in the Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012
Overall
, it is clear that
only robbery
faced a slight change as compared to other crimes.
In 2003 highest rate of crimes was done is burglary which is 3500 and the lowest crime was done is robbery
(500). After that burglary keeps on decreasing and in 2008 it was about 1200 incidents
but robbery
slightly increased in the year
2005 to 800 incidents
. The number of incidents
of burglary again start rising in 2009 which was about 1500 and then
show fluctuation till the last
year
(2012). In 2006 the number of incidents
of apply
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applied
robbery
shows a slight stability and in the latter ,year
it was about 600.
Looking forward the number of incidents
of car theft was 2600 in the initial year
which shows a great fluctuation every year
and in the last
year
it decreased to 2400Submitted by nikitakumari on
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