The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.

The line graph illustrates three different kind of crimes that occurred in Newport city centre between 2003 and 2012.
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The given line graph depicts the information about the crimes that occurred in the Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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only
robbery
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faced a slight change as compared to other crimes. In 2003 highest rate of crimes was done is burglary which is 3500 and the lowest crime was done is
robbery
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(500). After that burglary keeps on decreasing and in 2008 it was about 1200
incidents
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but
robbery
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slightly increased in the
year
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2005 to 800
incidents
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. The number of
incidents
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of burglary again start rising in 2009 which was about 1500 and
then
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show fluctuation till the
last
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year
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(2012). In 2006 the number of
incidents
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of
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robbery
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shows a slight stability and in the latter ,
year
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it was about 600. Looking forward the number of
incidents
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of car theft was 2600 in the initial
year
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which shows a great fluctuation every
year
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and in the
last
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year
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it decreased to 2400

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words robbery, incidents, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recorded
  • trends
  • criminal activity
  • categories
  • theft
  • assault
  • vandalism
  • graph
  • x-axis
  • y-axis
  • number of crimes
  • visual representation
  • changes
  • crime rates
  • fluctuating pattern
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