The charts below show the primary hobbies of the adult residents in a small Tunisian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the primary hobbies of the adult residents in a small Tunisian town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the main activities that
people
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who live in a small Tunisian town do during their leisure time in three different years within a 40-year period. It is shown that there are seven hobbies and that the number of
people
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engaged in each varied within the given duration.
Firstly
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in 1980, 100
people
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were engaged in each hobby equally
whereas
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2000 and 2020, interest in TV and movies, books and working out had increased gradually.
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, the number of villagers attached to playing music remained constant from 1980 to 2020.
Furthermore
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, in 2000 and 2020, count of men and women who enjoyed baking, gardening and video games had declined compared to 1980. Significant growth can be seen from 2000 to 2020 when about 30 more
people
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started enjoying TV and movies.
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, during the same period, approximately the same number of villagers stopped video gaming as one of their leisurely activities.
To conclude
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, the attached charts provide information on how preferences for hobbies had changed over time from 1980 to 2020.
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