Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

Certain individuals believe that

rivalry

amongs

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among

amongst

peers should be inspired.

However

, others consider that youngsters who are educated to collaborate with others rather than match are going

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more useful when

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older.

While

competitiveness is healthy and adequate it should remain

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the

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part of

children

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development. There are many reasons why

rivalry

should be encouraged. Parents should teach them not to stop on the achieved and bo better than they did.

However

, parents need to explain that competitiveness has

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limit

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. They need to understand it can lead to some problems like burnout and

agression

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aggression

.

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good example of

competititon

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competition

is competition with yourself. You have to do better than you did yesterday or a week ago.

This

kind of vying will be healthy for everyone.

On the other hand

, other people consider that being co

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is way better than being

competative

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competitive

. They think

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rivalry

will only bring problems during

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work.

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co operation

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cooperation

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does all the work.

Co operation

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is not enough. Children need to compete with each other to produce better results.

For example

, at school students tend to compete

while

doing something. It

encoursges

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encourages

them to perform better. In conclusion, I want to say that healthy

rivalry

should be present in children. They need to have a sense of competitiveness as long as it is healthy and adequate. It will only make them better.

In addition

, it will help them to perform better now and in the future.