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The manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane

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The diagram explains the way in which
sugar
 is produced from
sugarcane
.
Overall
 the process contains seven stages, beginning with the growing of
sugarcane
 and ending up with drying and cooling down the
sugar
 crystals. First of all,
sugarcane
 has been grown. It takes around 12-18 months to grow. After that, the farmer starts cutting down the
sugarcane
 by using the procedure of harvesting. The cut
sugarcane
 is
then
 transferred to a machine where it comes out in the form of juice.
Next,
the juice is put through a limestone filter to purify it. In the next stage, the purified juice has been heated to make syrup out of it.
Following
this
, by using the centrifuge method the
sugar
 crystals get separated from the
sugar
 syrup. After that, the
sugar
 crystals are kept to get dry and cool.
Finally
, the
sugar
 is ready for use.
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