The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The histogram showcases the percentages of
residents
consuming and drinking coffee
and tea by
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in
three
seperated
ways in five Correct your spelling
separated
separate
cities
in Australia.
Generally speaking, the least people have bought fresh coffee
in last
4 weeks among Correct article usage
the last
three
options, Correct article usage
the three
while
the quantity of individuals going to a café for coffee
or tea is the highest in almost overall
cities
. Sydney, Melboune
and Hobart have seen more Correct your spelling
Melbourne
residents
buying fresh coffee
or going to a café than the other two cities
.
It is clear that
buying fresh coffee
was the least popular habit among the five cities
, since the highest percentage of a city’s residents
choosing this
method, which is slightly underneath 45% in Sydney, is lower than the lowest percentage of other
two habits. Four Correct article usage
the other
cities
out of five prefered
consuming Correct your spelling
preferred
coffee
or tea in a café the most, except Adelaide, where the number of people buying instant coffee
exceeds by a small margin.
The percentages of residents
of Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart are greater than those in Brisbane and Adelaide between the action of buying fresh coffee
and the action of going to a café. According to
the chart, the percentages of the three
cities
of residents
consuming drinks in a café are
all surpass 60%, and the according statistics Unnecessary verb
apply
of
buying fresh Change preposition
for
coffee
are greater than 35% as well, whereas
neither of the other cities
conformed with the two statements. However
, as for the habit of buying instant coffee
, Brisbane and Adelaine are among the top three
cities
, whose statistics are just slightly under Hobart’s 62%.Submitted by theshamerider0 on
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