You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter • say how you heard about the plan • explain how you feel about it • ask for more information about it Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is Milav Soni from sector number 2A.
This
letter regarding the news that I have recently heard about a new shopping centre
will
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be build
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in our area and would like to know more about it.
Firstly
, I read
this
development news from the newspaper
last
week Sunday. I saw a big advertisement
of
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for
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shopping
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a shopping
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centre
in
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on
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last
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page of the paper. I went through all the features of it and I find it very interesting and beautiful.
Moreover
, I went to the website of
shopping
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the shopping
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mall
which I found in the advertisement. I
surprised
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by watching all the facilities of the
mall
. I felt happy because that
mall
consists
Starbucks
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of Starbucks
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Cafe and other branded clothes shops.
Moreover
, it
also
consists
more
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of more
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than five diverse cuisines. I am very curious about it and wait for it to open.
Lastly
, I would like to know more about the shop's name and
their
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its
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facilities. Is there any theatre available in the
mall
? Are there any Thai Restaurants available? Could you please provide us
a
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bit
of
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apply
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more information about the
mall
? I would appreciate a reply at your earliest convenience. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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