Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….,

Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing
this
letter to you regarding the advertisement
about
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a helper needed in your home for sometime in a day next summer. Being a student, I have to show volunteering activities in every
six month
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periods
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to my school. I have done a couple of the same home caretaker roles in the past. I help you to arrange things in
you
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home properly because I am a tidy person.
Additionally
, I help you to get vegetables and fruits from
market
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since your language is
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from our local language.
Finally
, I will take care of your children and learn them my mother tongue as you requested in the paper. I am a student at gurukul school and I need to submit some volunteering work to my teacher every two months.
Therefore
, I think
this
is a great chance to get work and learn more experiences in my life. And, I am a very cool and energetic person. My school time is in the morning from 8,00 AM to 1:00 PM on weekdays.
Therefore
, I am available after 4:00 PM on that days. And, on sunday, I am available whole day. Let me know your suitable time.
Moreover
, I am
also
available in WhatsApp for instant talk. I will happy to supply any
further
information you require. I look forward to you replay. Best regards, Milav Soni
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