The chart below shoes the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information about how many households owned and rented residences in the UK and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, it is clear that
the proportion of the population
who owned a house had an upward trend, while
the percentage of the population
who rented accommodation
experienced a downward trend from 1918 to 2011.
To begin
, in 1918, the proportion of the population
who owned a house stood at around just over 20%. Then
, it was a slight increase just
over 30% and remained constant from 1939 to 1953. After that, there was Change preposition
of just
a
dramatic growth until 2011, Correct article usage
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but it
at the end
of the period. In contrast
, the percentage of the population
who rented accommodation
witnessed a substantial decline between 1918 and 2011. After
this
, there was a slight increase after a decade.
As the given bar graph shows, the rate of the population
who rented accommodation
was the highest in 1918 at around 78%, whereas
, the rate of the population
who owned accommodation
was the highest in 2011 at about 69% which was a different rate just only 9% but the figure depicted that people required to be an owner of a house much more than renting in the past.Submitted by evetanyaporn on
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