The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart compares the destinations of anthropology students from the same university after completing their undergraduate studies. The table gives their earnings after five years of
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It is clear that
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the majority of undergraduates decide to
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full-time. After five years of
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,
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working in the government sector earn the most, compared to those working as freelance consultants or in private companies. More than half of anthropology students found a full-time job after graduation,
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15% worked part-time. 13% of students decided to study
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and begin their postgraduate studies, with 5% working part-time and studying part-time and 8% studying wholly. One-fifth of the
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could not find a job or info about them remained unknown.
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working in the government sector are by far the highest paid, with half of them earning $100,000 and only 5% earning less than $50,000.
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, only 30% of those working in private companies earned more than $100,000.
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who
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as freelance consultants, meanwhile, were relatively in the middle of the pack in terms of earnings.
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