One of the areas that governments must invest in is the
transportation
sector. Some people believe that they should spend more money on the
railwaysChange to a genitive case
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section than
the Change to a genitive case
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roads
section. It
is disagreedChange to the active voice
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that governments should spend money on
railways
.
One area of
transportation
is good
transportation
. There are several reasons that road
transportation
is more important than railway
transportation
.
Firstly
, the amount of time
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road
transportation
is much more than
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and
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because of the speed and routes.
For example
,
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delivery
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railway takes one week,
however
,
this
time for the road is about three or four days. So, to transfer some goods like a diary that have an expiration date,
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might take lots of loss.
Secondly
, the size of some goods
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huge and it is impossible to transfer them
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.
Finally
, there are some limitations
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constructing
railways
and
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some
it is impossible to build
railways
.
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area of
transportation
is for passengers. By comparing the
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of people which can be transported by
railways
with
roads
, the number of passengers
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railways
is much more than
roads
. Safety is another subject that matters, and
railways
are safer than
roads
,
due to
the speed limit and there are no other trains where accidents can happen.
While
if some
railways
are destroyed, virtually
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can't
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from that, and
this
can't happen for
roads
because there are more
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.
Consequently
, by comparing two sectors of
transportation
,
roads
and
railways
, for goods and passengers, we find out the advantages of
roads
are more than
railways
. And I disagree with
this
statement that governments should spend money on
railways
rather than
roads
.