Travelling abroad is a common trend nowadays for different reasons.This essay will discuss two main reasons for this cause and point out the negative impacts that would have on Society.

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often in more developing

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more and more abroad. The democratisation of travelling for tourism in foreign

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is one of the causes of

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upward trend

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globalization more generally, with

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the delocalization of companies abroad. Journeys for tourism in foreign

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knew a tremendous success over the

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few years. Indeed,

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decade it was more expensive and so more complicated to

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for a lot of

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recently, new airline companies are arrived with attractive offers to trip around the world.

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, it has given new possibilities for the majority of

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who can't before, realise a journey in their dream location. Regarding globalization, it is obvious that it had an impact on

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around the world with commercial flights and so on. Nowadays going to work abroad is an opportunity which is more and more given by employers.

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an opportunity that employees often took in order to have the chance to discover new cultures, new job routines, methods...

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new trend,

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seen positively by

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who have the chance to

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, can have dramatic impacts on continents,

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, and cities.

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, we all know the consequences that can have

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. The issue is the pollution and CO2 emissions that planes generate across the world and all the negative aspects that result from

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activity as climate change and global warming. The second point I would like to expose is the fact that the victim cities of their success have to modify their habits,

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facilities to be able to welcome tourists.

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, it modifies the way civilization can live and so

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local population could have difficulties finding accommodation for themselves

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which is a paramount issue.

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would conclude with the fact that tourism is of course fulfilling on a personal level.

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for the planet

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for society,

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impact which should be controlled by governments. The key point to me is to limit

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per person by year in order to control over-tourism.