Travelling abroad is a common trend nowadays for different reasons.This essay will discuss two main reasons for this cause and point out the negative impacts that would have on Society.

Many

people

often in more developing

countries

travel

more and more abroad. The democratisation of travelling for tourism in foreign

countries

is one of the causes of

this

upward trend

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globalization more generally, with

for example

the delocalization of companies abroad. Journeys for tourism in foreign

countries

knew a tremendous success over the

last

few years. Indeed,

last

decade it was more expensive and so more complicated to

travel

for a lot of

people

.

However

recently, new airline companies are arrived with attractive offers to trip around the world.

As a result

, it has given new possibilities for the majority of

people

who can't before, realise a journey in their dream location. Regarding globalization, it is obvious that it had an impact on

travel

around the world with commercial flights and so on. Nowadays going to work abroad is an opportunity which is more and more given by employers.

This

an opportunity that employees often took in order to have the chance to discover new cultures, new job routines, methods...

This

new trend,

although

seen positively by

people

who have the chance to

travel

, can have dramatic impacts on continents,

countries

, and cities.

Therefore

, we all know the consequences that can have

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travel

. The issue is the pollution and CO2 emissions that planes generate across the world and all the negative aspects that result from

this

activity as climate change and global warming. The second point I would like to expose is the fact that the victim cities of their success have to modify their habits,

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facilities to be able to welcome tourists.

In other words

, it modifies the way civilization can live and so

as a result

local population could have difficulties finding accommodation for themselves

for instance

which is a paramount issue.

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would conclude with the fact that tourism is of course fulfilling on a personal level.

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for the planet

as well as

for society,

this

activity has

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environment

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,

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impact which should be controlled by governments. The key point to me is to limit

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per person by year in order to control over-tourism.