Task 2: Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of individuals believe that international
news
should be taught as one of their obligatory courses in secondary
schools
.
While
some others think that the secondary
students
' time will waste by
this
issue. In
this
essay, I would discuss both issues and
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give my idea about them. On one hand, at the
first,
One group believe that in
this
contemporary era, international
news
,
are
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not useful. All the social media and TV channels have been including
of
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bad
news
and it is not good for
students
' spirits. It can have some negative effects on their efficiency of learning.
Secondly
,
this
group of people claim that the interesting field of every student is individual.
schools
should give
the
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right of choosing their major by themselves and they learn everything that they want and the
compulsary
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compulsory
should not exist in their lessons.
Finally
, they do not interested in
news
in
this
part of their life. they should have more fun and enjoyable subjects like dancing and singing courses. So
this
kind of
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make
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them unhappy.
On the other
hand
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some people think that it is crucial for every young person to know about what is happening in the universe. in the other words, they believe that knowing about international
news
will make them aware
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some important items.
For example
politics, environmental issues, cultural awareness and other items in the world.
Therefore
, they will have lots of benefits if they learn about nations'
news
in their secondary
schools
.
Although
it is a good idea to know about what is happening in the universe, I think it is not important for the
students
in their teenth to learn about it. It can be optional for them if they
interested
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in
this
field to know more about it. In conclusion, in
this
article
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both sides of the idea
about
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learning
news
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the news
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of
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the current affairs of
world
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by secondary
schools'
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pupils are investigated. In my opinion, teaching these kinds of
news
is not necessary
in
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this
step of
students
' life.
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