The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.

The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
These two pie charts depict the major sources of
power
in the eighth and ninth decades
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the
20s
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20th
century in the United States. It is clear from the graph that depending on oil energy dropped throughout the period of time.
According to
what is shown, in the 1980s, oil took the highest percentage of the whole usage. where natural gas was the second largest source which was about a quarter. For coal, it had a small minority of
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the proportion.
Lastly
, nuclear
power
,
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and hydroelectric
power
were a tiny fraction and they represented the same ratio (5%).
On the other hand
, in the 1990s,
a lots
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of figures and employment of
power
changed. Natural gas did not show any obvious
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, so it decreased modestly by 1%.
Secondly
, oil consumption as
a
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energy substantially dropped where it got
one third
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of all the ratio. Coal and nuclear
power
were the only two which climbed
thier
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their
figures. Ultimately, hydroelectric
power
sustained at the same level by 5% mark.
To sum up
, we could say that some of the sources of
power
had been
aviouded
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avoided
in the 1990s when they
sinked
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sinned
. And some others like coal and nuclear
power
became more popular.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Petroleum
  • Natural gas
  • Coal
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectricity
  • Percentage change
  • Megawatts (MW)
  • Gigawatts (GW)
  • Sustainable
  • Environmental impact
  • Energy policy
  • Industrial
  • Domestic usage
  • Energy shift
  • Energy mix
  • Decade comparison
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